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Sunday, September 14, 2008
Dreamtime
Your eyes shadow hollow closed I kissed Lips sweet memory pained And wept Coddled as we were in dreamtime Far from Maughm St In the wake sleep time of Closeness I didn't know you But I know you Now
You dare to call me a poet! The lines don't rhyme, there is no alit...arlit... repitition of a beginning sound in two or more words of a phrase (well I don't think so) and my names not Dylan Thomas (who?). Thanks Shubhajit no one has called me a poet before.
4 comments:
simple lines, extraordinary reflection..you are a poet also:)
You dare to call me a poet! The lines don't rhyme, there is no alit...arlit... repitition of a beginning sound in two or more words of a phrase (well I don't think so) and my names not Dylan Thomas (who?).
Thanks Shubhajit no one has called me a poet before.
i love dylan thomas.
Mickey - you poor sad individual that your life is so empty you have to love a dead poet and a Welshman to boot.
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